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That's the subtitle, is it missing a word?
I don't think so, does it sound weird? Not a native speaker, so maybe it does :)
It would sound better as one of the following:
I don't think it's grammatically incorrect (native speaker, but not a grammar expert), it just sounds odd.
I considered recommending "attempt at" but "an attempt at a model" still sounds weird. OP went with "to create" which sounds better 🙂
It does. How about
Or, in place of summarize - define, or outline?
Thanks, I have taken @sugar_in_your_tea@sh.itjust.works's suggestion and I have added "create".
Aw how come you always take his ideas instead of mine it's not fair
Sorry about that :) But you get the credit for spotting the problem! Thanks for that!