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Every pub needs a vision statement (awful.systems)

submitted 2 months ago by mpk@awful.systems to c/linkedinlunatics@sh.itjust.works

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[–] Crashumbc@lemmy.world 3 points 2 months ago (1 children)

While this is writing, it's not formal, it's a marketing ad directed less than savvy want to be entrepreneurs... It's meant to be sales speech.

[–] sugar_in_your_tea@sh.itjust.works 0 points 2 months ago (1 children)

Right, and a sales speech should be somewhat formal. It's not like an essay or legal appeal, but it should be a lot more formal than a discussion at a backyard BBQ or whatever.

[–] taladar@sh.itjust.works 1 points 2 months ago

I don't know. I think it gets the point that the writer is a marketing or sales idiot across quite clearly if the grammar is bad too.