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New story, I hope you like it. Feedback always welcome.

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[–] poVoq@slrpnk.net 1 points 11 months ago (1 children)

I can see what you are trying to do in this text, but as a metaphor it doesn't really work and the use of "open web" etc makes it too up front as well. Which leaves this text in a weird half metaphorical / half not situation that is rather confusing.

And it isn't very Solarpunkish 😉

[–] blue_berry@feddit.de 1 points 11 months ago* (last edited 11 months ago)

Ok, I see. To be honest, I didn't put as much thought in this than in the last stories. Maybe it would have worked if it was longer ... I will think about it! Thanks anyway for the feedback.

And it isn’t very Solarpunkish 😉

the use of “open web” etc makes it too up front as well

That's true. But otherwise, I don't think the idea would have come across

Well yes, but Solarpunk also supported dezentrality 😇

the use of “open web” etc makes it too up front as well