this post was submitted on 26 Aug 2023
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Generally nice. I think the shadow on the left side of the body has the wrong color (basically invisible) and the face itself feels a bit crammed. Have you tried it without eyes (like this, maybe with a visor down), or perhaps a different eye color?
I think the eyes are pretty critical unfortunately. I agree that it could be simplified a bit. When scaled down on a home screen it looks a bit detailed. Here's a simplified version. I've reduced the strength of the nose and whiskers, and hidden the bottom whiskers under the visor. I've also removed the grid texture from the visor and the details from the space suit. I also made the moon darker so that the shadow on the left side of the torso isn't a problem anymore. Let me know what you think.
Haha, critique about too much detail coming from the guy who crammed all kinds of shit into the current icon :D
Apart from the visor grid, which probably no one notices, I think having the details on the suit are nice and the colors match better in the original one, but thatβs just my opinion. I could be wrong, but I think smaller eyes and white instead of red might look better.